Thursday, 27 January 2011

Playing against stereotypes

TICK TOCK (unproduced screenplay)

Premise: A terrorist has planted a series of bombs inside several malls in Los Angeles. Although they capture the man before the bombs go off, a bout of amnesia prevents him from remembering where he put the bombs, or if he’s the terrorist at all.

folder: screenplays
password (as above, use small case letters)


1. Kidnapping a baby


RAISING ARISONA (undated draft)

Another baby starts crying. Florence looks up at the ceiling.

NATHAN
That sounds like Larry.

Close on the crying baby as Hi bounces it, gently but
desperately.

HI
Shhhh! Shh! Nice baby...

He starts to lower it back into the crib. The crib is
unpainted with the name of each baby burned Bonanza-style
into the headboard: Harry, Barry, Larry, Garry, and Nathan
Jr. Instead of quieting as he is lowered into the crib, the
squalling baby only sets off one of his brothers. Hi hurriedly
lifts him back out.

He looks desperately around the room.

The room is wallpapered with nursery rhyme characters.

There are toys strewn around. There is one adult-sized easy
chair in the corner.

Hi carries the baby over to the chair, stepping on and
reacting to the squeal of a squeeze-me toy on the way. He
sits the baby deep in - the chair and then returns to the
crib to deal with the second crying baby.

He lifts the baby out of the crib and gently bounces it.
This baby stops crying.

Another one in the crib starts bawling.

Hi sets the second baby down on the floor and gives it a
rattle to keep it pacified. He reaches for the third baby in
the crib. Sweat stands out on Hi 's brow. He is desperately
chucking the third baby under the chin when we hear a muffled
PTHUMP!

He whirls to look across the darkened room.

The first baby has dropped off the easy chair and is
energetically crawling away toward a shadowy corner.

LIVING ROOM

Nathan and Florence are sitting stock-still, staring at the
ceiling. After a moment, another baby starts crying.

NATHAN
What're they, playing telephone?

They stare at the ceiling.

NURSERY

Loose babies are crawling everywhere. Hi is skittering across
the room in a half-crouch, a baby tucked under one arm,
reaching out with the other as he pursues a crawling baby
across the room.

He hefts the other baby with his free arm and brings the air
back to the crib.

He turns to look frantically around the room.

The other three babies have disappeared.

There is perfect quiet.

Hi goes over to the closet door, which is ajar, and swings
it open.

He reaches under a moving pile of clothes on the floor and
pulls out a baby.

He returns it to the crib and freezes, listening.

The sound of a rattle.

He drops to the floor to look under the crib.

WIDE ANGLE UNDER CRIB

A baby holding a rattle leers into the camera in the
foreground. Behind him Hi, on his stomach, is reaching in to
grab at his leg.

Hi is pulling the baby out, away from the camera, when with
a plop! a baby drops onto Hi 's back from the crib above.

Hi twists one arm back to grope for the baby crawling on top
of him.

He is straightening up, a baby in each arm, when he reacts
in horror to something he sees across the room.

HI'S POV

The hindquarters of a diapered baby are just disappearing
around the corner of the nursery door into the hallway.

LIVING ROOM

Florence and Nathan are staring at the ceiling. After a beat
we hear a muffled plop! on the ceiling. A beat later, the
bleat of the squeeze-me toy.

NATHAN
...Whyn't you go up and check on
'em?

They sound restless.

UPSTAIRS HALLWAY

The floor-level wide-angle shot shows a baby crawling toward
the camera in the foreground. Behind him, in the background,
just rounding the open door from the nursery, yet another
baby is making a mad dash for freedom.

Hi emerges from the nursery and, stepping around the
background baby, trots toward the baby in the foreground. By
the time he reaches it the low-angle cropping shows us only
his feet and calves.

CLOSE ON HI

Perspiring as he tiptoes the last two steps to the baby.

HI'S POV

The baby and, beyond it, the stairway down to the main floor.
We hear footsteps approaching.

BACK TO HI

He scoops up the baby and hurriedly tiptoes away toward the
nursery.

LOW-ANGLE REVERSE

The baby at the nursery door in the foreground; the staircase
in the background. As Hi reaches the baby we hear footsteps
climbing the stairs.

Hi's free arm comes down into frame to scoop the baby up and
out of frame just as:

Florence's head appears, bobbing up as she climbs the stairs.

She approaches the nursery, still clutching the Dr. Spock
book.

NURSERY

As Florence enters from the hallway door.

We track back into the room, on her, as she approaches the
crib. Halfway there she freezes, staring, in shock.

HER POV

All of the babies have been replaced in the crib but not
lying down: They are seated in a row, staring back at her,
lined up against the far crib railing, like a small but
distinguished panel on "Meet the Press."


2. Death of a mother

ANIMAL KINGDOM (shooting script)
INT. J'S AND JULIA'S APARTMENT / LOUNGE - DAY

JOSHUA 'J' CODY (17), wearing one oversized rubber dishwashing
glove, sits on the couch beside his mum, JULIA CODY (35), who is
asleep, chin on her chest, in front of game-show TV. J watches
the TV intently.
Two paramedics appear at the open door with kit bags. They rush
in and go straight to work on Julia.

PARAMEDIC
What's she had?

J
Heroin.

The paramedic draws Narcan into a syringe and administers. The
other checks her pulse. J watches the game show.

PARAMEDIC
Not responding. We'll need a MICA.

INT. J'S AND JULIA'S APARTMENT / LOUNGE - NIGHT

J is on the phone. He waits for an answer, strangely blank.

J
(into phone)
Grandma. It's J [...] Josh [...] Yeah,
good. Um, Mum's gone and OD'd and
she's died and so [...] Yeah, I'm OK.
Sorry, I probably should have said it
slower and not just go and blurt it
out and that. I don't really know what
I'm supposed to do now and [...] They
took her away.
An ambulance came [...] Yeah, they
turned up and took a statement and
that, but I told them I was 18 and now
I don't really know what to do. They
didn't say anything about, you know,
like am I supposed to organise the
funeral and that? I don't really know
what I'm supposed to do now, with the
paperwork and arrangements and that. I
just remember when Grandpa Donny died
you were all over it, you know what I
mean?





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Wednesday, 19 January 2011

Exposition revisited - character

Lock Stock and Two Smoking Barrels (1998 draft)




114

BARFLY JACK
Yeah, I know Rory.

This next section is subtitled. This is to keep everyone, even those
familiar with cockney rhyming slang up to speed with the narration, of
which even Tom is unsure. As with the police scene earlier this is a
voice-over and we cut to the relevant scenes.

BARFLYJACK
(voice-over)
Rory's got few interests in life; darky music, football, bees and honey
and kicking the shit out of anyone that interferes with that shortlist.
A few nights ago Rory's Roger iron rusted, so he has gone to the
battle-cruiser to watch the end of a football game. Nobody is watching
the custard so he has turned the channel over. A fat man's north opens
and he wanders up and turns the Liza over. `Now fuck off and watch it
somewhere else.' Rory knows claret is imminent, but he doesn't want to
miss the end of the game; so, calm as a coma, he stands and picks up a
fire extinguisher and he walks straight past the jam rolls who are
ready for action, then he plonks it outside the entrance. He then
orders an Aristotle of the most ping pong oddly in the nuclear sub and
switches back to his footer. `That's fucking it,' says the man. Rory
gobs out a mouthful of booze covering fatty; he flicks a flaming match
into his bird's nest and the man lit up like a leaking gas pipe. Rory,
unfazed, turned back to watch his game. The flaming man and his chinos
ran outside to extinguish the flames, and Rory cheered on. His team won
too, four-nil.

Script link

Tuesday, 18 January 2011

List of all written assignments this semester

Everything I needed from you to give you the signature:



1. Suicidal Bunny "Terminator" scene (individual/group) - a one or two page script focusing on transition and camera angles.

2. Character Arc analysis (go here to see what it was about) or Archetypes analysis (more info here) - just choose your favourite film/script and either focus on the way the main protagonist develops or see what functions (or archetypes) all main characters represent.

3. "Adopting" a character for a day - a description of a character's background. Choose a character from a film/script or invent one, spend a day imagining s/he is with you all the time, and describe what you have learned about him/her.

4. "Twist in the end" two page script. A short script that constitutes a complete story. Focus on original ideas ("high concepts") or the planting/pay-off technique. Go here to read more.

5. Putting the spin on Three Little Pigs (group). A short (up to 3 pages) original take on the fairytale. Pay attention to the way you handle exposition.


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Minimalism

Two characters. One place. One scene. No plot.

The pure power of words.




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Friday, 14 January 2011

Scripts online!

Two screenplays just went online. Both films will very likely be nominated for Oscars, and The King's Speech will probably take the trophy.

Deadline publishes both scripts today:

The Social Network (aka the Facebook film)

The King's Speech



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You Tube tip

If you've never seen this show before, check them out.


Wednesday, 12 January 2011

Writing session 2 - exposition

You know your STORY like the back of your hand. You understand your CHARACTERS, their motivation, quirks, where they are coming from. You know all about their childhood - the happy moments that shaped their personality and the nightmares that still haunt and torture them. You know the basic rules that govern the WORLD in which your story is set.

...but your READER has no idea about any of these.


In each script you will inevitably have to introduce your reader to some information necessary for him or her to understand what is happening and why, or why the characters are acting in a given way. This is what we call EXPOSITION.


Film script should be all about showing, not telling. Telling is always boring. Remember that. ALWAYS. If you confront your readers (and eventually the audience) with a long paragraph explaining what is going on, you will lose them.


Therefore writers (and directors) have devised some clever ways of hiding exposition.


Here are some most common:

1) PLAIN TEXT

"opening crawl" - Star Wars (1977)



Script link: Star Wars: A New Hope (1976 draft)

A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far, away...

A vast sea of stars serves as the backdrop for the main title.
War drums echo through the heavens as a rollup slowly crawls
into infinity.

It is a period of civil war. Rebel spaceships,
striking from a hidden base, have won their first
victory against the evil Galactic Empire.

During the battle, Rebel spies managed to steal
secret plans to the Empire's ultimate weapon, the
Death Star, an armored space station with enough
power to destroy an entire planet.

Pursued by the Empire's sinister agents, Princess
Leia races home aboard her starship, custodian of
the stolen plans that can save her people and
restore freedom to the galaxy...

The awesome yellow planet of Tatooine emerges from a total
eclipse, her two moons glowing against the darkness. A tiny
silver spacecraft, a Rebel Blockade Runner firing lasers
from the back of the ship, races through space. It is pursed
by a giant Imperial Stardestroyer. Hundreds of deadly
laserbolts streak from the Imperial Stardestroyer, causing
the main solar fin of the Rebel craft to disintegrate.



2) TEXT CARDS + PICTURE/MONTAGE


A Knight's Tale (2000)



Script link: Inglorious Basterds by Quentin Tarantino

          
EXT - DAIRY FARM- DAY
The modest dairy farm in the countryside of Nancy, France (what the
French call cow country).

We Read a SUBTITLE in the sky above the farm house;

CHAPTER ONE

"ONCE UPON A TIME IN...

NAZI OCCUPIED FRANCE"
This SUBTITLE disappears, and is replaced by another one;

"1941
One year into the German
occupation of France".

The farm consists of a house, small barn, and twelve cows spread
about.
The owner of the property, a bull of a man FRENCH FARMER, brings a axe
up and down on A tree stump blemishing his property. However simply by
sight, you'd never know if he's been beating at this stump for the last
year, or just started today.


3) VO + PICTURE/MONTAGE


The Lord of the Rings: The Fellowship of the Ring (2001) opening sequence
Clash of the Titans (2010) opening "galaxy" sequence

Script link: The Lord of the Rings (undated draft)

BLACK SCREEN

SUPER: New Line Cinema Presents

SUPER: A Wingnut Films Production

BLACK CONTINUES... ELVISH SINGING....A WOMAN'S VOICE IS
whispering, tinged with SADNESS and REGRET:

GALADRIEL (V.O.)
(Elvish: subtitled)
"I amar prestar sen: han mathon ne nen,
han mathon ne chae...a han noston ned
wilith."
(English:)
The world is changed: I feel it in the
water, I feel it in the earth, I smell it
in the air...Much that once was is lost,
for none now live who remember it.

SUPER: THE LORD OF THE RINGS

EXT. PROLOGUE -- DAY

IMAGE: FLICKERING FIRELIGHT. The NOLDORIN FORGE in EREGION.
MOLTEN GOLD POURS from the lip of an IRON LADLE.

GALADRIEL (V.O.)
It began with the forging of the Great
Rings.

IMAGE: THREE RINGS, each set with a single GEM, are received
by the HIGH ELVES-GALADRIEL, GIL-GALAD and CIRDAN.

GALADRIEL (V.O.) (CONT'D)
Three were given to the Elves, immortal,
wisest...fairest of all beings.

IMAGE: SEVEN RINGS held aloft in triumph by the DWARF LORDS.

GALADRIEL (V.O.) (CONT'D)
Seven to the Dwarf Lords, great miners
and craftsmen of the mountain halls.

IMAGE: NINE RINGS clutched tightly by the KINGS OF MEN...as
if holding-close a precious secret.

GALADRIEL (V.O.) (CONT'D)
And Nine...nine rings were gifted to the
race of Men who, above all else, desire
power.
(MORE)



4) MONTAGE

RED (2010)
The Disappearance of Alice Creed (2010)




5) EXPOSITION IN DIALOGUE

Inception (2010) - "shared dreaming sequence"


6) FLASHBACK


7) ANIMATED FLASHBACK

Ciało (2003) - character shorts




8) PICTURES, NEWSPAPER CLIPPINGS, HEADLINES

Rogue (2007) - bar sequence

Script link: Avatar (2007 draft)

INT. SHACK - DAY

NORM and TRUDY assist JAKE with his chair as they cycle in
through the AIRLOCK. GRACE is already inside, starting the
GENNY. She turns on the lights and equipment.

There are 4 bunks, a clutter of science gear, and -- through
a short connecting corridor -- THREE LINK UNITS in the second
module.

As Grace powers up the Link equipment, Jake stops to look at
STEREO STILL PICTURES which are taped and tacked up around
her workstation.

CLOSE ON PICTURES -- Grace posing at the school with various
grinning children. There is one of her with two lanky girls,
a younger Neytiri and an older girl who looks much like her.


BONUS LINKS:
- best character intro
- best film opening


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